Examples of Multiple Antagonists in one story
I’ll be writing about the video Examples of how to use different Antagonists when writing a book or film. SPOILERS – Jurassic Park, from the writing advice series I’m doing on YouTube with Jonathan McKinney.
I’ve written before about the difference between the Protaognist and the Antagonist in your story and how you use them, but in some stories you’ll want to use multiple antagonists. I’ll give you some examples of how multiple antagonists can be used in one story, different kinds, and the effect it has, using one of my favourite films in the whole world as an example: Jurassic Park.
The obvious antagonist in Jurassic Park is John Hammond. He was the designer of Jurassic Park and, arguably, is responsible for all the things that went wrong. There’s also Dennis Nedry who sells the science to a rival company, then shuts down the electricity when stealing the dino DNA, which then frees the dinosaurs from their cages. The dinosaurs themselves are also Antagonists, because they want to be free, and the humans don’t want them to be free.
So, taking John Hammond as the first example. John Hammond is a man playing God, which is a kind of antagonist which features frequently in stories, particularly in science fiction. Humans deciding they are able to create and control life usually ends badly in story, as it sets the created life against the existing life. A lot of science fiction, at it’s core, is about the consequences of choosing to create sentient beings, be they living creatures or robots.So, taking John Hammond as the first example. John Hammond is a man playing God, which is a kind of antagonist which features frequently in stories, particularly in science fiction. Humans deciding they are able to create and control life usually ends badly in story, as it sets the created life against the existing life. A lot of science fiction, at it’s core, is about the consequences of choosing to create sentient beings, be they living creatures or robots.
Dennis Nedry is representative of “the criminal.” Criminals are frequently occurring Antagonists, they’re morally unscrupulous and their downfall is their greed. The criminal who is willing to put everyone at risk for their own personal gain is a great character to deploy in your story. In the case of Nedry, he’s there from the beginning being sneaky, and even though nobody likes him he’s still trusted enough to have access to everything he needs to be the criminal. So to use a character like this in your own story, it needs to be somebody who is motivated to put everything at risk, but also trusted enough to be able to do it.
Thematically Nedry is particularly interesting because he represents the lack of control John Hammond has over life. Hammond thinks he has control over everybody which is why Nedry is able to do the things he does, because Hammond is arrogant enough to not consider the betrayal, or to consider the negative consequences.
Nature itself makes an excellent antagonist in stories. As Jeff Goldblum’s character Dr Malcolm says, life will find a way. So nature is intent on surviving and flourishing, even when humans think they are able to stop it. In Jurassic Park, that is demonstrated by the discovery that the dinosaurs can change their sex because of the frog DNA used in their creation. It hammers home the price of your character playing God. Nature will not be controlled. Dinosaurs being able to change sex means they’re able to breed, so they can appear in unexpected places and in larger numbers.
Essentially, all your different Antagonists are working to do something which, when combined, cause a massive problem for your Protagonists. In Jurassic Park, even though killing everybody isn’t the goal of the goal of the Antagonists, the consequences of what they’re all doing has that result.
When you have multiple Antagonists, you’ll find that a number of them won’t be evil, they’re not a villain or a bad guy, they’re just flawed humans who are unable to keep their flaws in check. In the case of John Hammond, his flaw is his arrogance. He isn’t a “bad guy” who wants to hurt people, he just lacks self awareness and that causes him to hurt people. Personally, I really enjoy an Antagonist who is ultimately a good person but just makes huge mistakes and doesn’t fix it.
What you need to remember is that when you’re creating an antagonist, their role in your story is to be antagonistic towards your protagonist. So any kind of antagonist you put into your story, they’re only an antagonist if their goals are actively set against the goals of your protagonist.
You can find more writing advice on our YouTube channel where we’ll be releasing a piece of writing advice every day to help you become a better and more confident writer. If you have any writing questions, comment below and we will try to do a video for every question we get!